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I'm not sorry I left,

Not sorry I'm gone.

But it was you

Who left me alone.



I tried to find you,

When you turned away.

But you no longer saw me,

Said "It's better this way."



You used to love me,

And I still love you.

I thought we were perfect,

But never was that true.



So don't get me wrong,

I played my part.

My life was shattered,

But you don't have a heart



So I will say it again,

Like a practiced verse.

For your heart to be broken,

You need one first.
I was ready a heap of break up poems, and i thought i would give it a try. BTW i have never been in a relationship, so therefore do not know what it is like to break up with someone


this whole bunch of words (c) me
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NerraKenobi Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The last stanza is very thought-provoking, snips. Awesome poem :)
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XLR8OR1344 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Student General Artist
thanks nerra <3
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this poem is beautiful it expresses a lot of feeling and different emotions love it <3

I also write poems, a lot of them in a similar style to this one, that I think you may have interest in
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If maybe you take take a few minutes of your time to read mine and comment it would be ever so helpful
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XLR8OR1344 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student General Artist
thankyou for the feedback X3
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Guramiko Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student Interface Designer
sounds familiar to me :S Great job:) I like it
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XLR8OR1344 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student General Artist
i don't know if anyone has written this exact poem before, because that is highly improbable, but there are similar ones out there
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